This is where I spent the night of the storm
the lightening storm.
The small tent on the postage stamp deck
I planed to call home. A book a flashlight next the sleeping bag
such luxury away from the chatter and noise.
A retreat! Lessons to be learned from the frogs and coyotes.
Practice breathing, pay attention to the senses. The bight of sage
the chill of coyotes song followed by the frogs single note. Too
fast. Aw Rain.
How do soldiers not run at the first shot fired? What dies inside
to keep them alive? What poem do they recite? I asked
as the lightning drew near. As long as the frogs kept me company I was just fine.
Count the chirps between thunder and flash. Seven is a mile. Three closer.
None and I’m a quivering ball unable to breath. So much for meditation.
Some where far above my friend hollers E-ha! and I know I’m alive.
That’s how they do it, the solders, they stay awake for each other.
Carol
Margo Rody You asked us to write about Storm. This one took place in Freestone CA not far from where are, if you’re still in Napa. Thanks for the inspiration and opportunity to write this.
I love the approaching fog. Great shot, Carol.
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Thanks, but thank goodness the fog is taking it’s leave, after the rain storm.
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“What dies inside to keep them alive?”
What indeed? Beautiful words and pictures, Carol. 😉
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i’m quaking along with you – frightening when the storm gets that close…
and i love the bit about the soldiers: how do they not run? – by staying awake for each other… this touched me
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I usually love storms, but this one got a little to close for comfort. It felt like I was in combat. Ruth I’m so glad you felt the meaning of my words. Thanks for commenting.
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